I’m on the downhill slide to finish my Marquess and the Governess book and my friend Emery Lee aka Victoria Vane kindly volunteered to guest blog for me. How cool is that? Do you know what is even better? She’s giving away a free download of her new erotic Georgian novella, A BREACH OF PROMISE to one lucky commenter chosen at random.
Give a warm welcome to Emery Lee/Victoria Vane!!!
Since this blog is very much about risk taking, I am posting today about my own huge and exciting risky transition from romantic historical fiction to erotic historical romance, and to share a bit about my naughty new novellas.
How it all began… Late last spring I found myself in both a crisis of confidence and already floundering in a writing career that had only just begun. As many authors are aware, the oh-so-wonderful publication of that first novel is only the beginning of one’s struggles. Often the second and third book deals don’t come much easier than the first. While I had sold and finished my second novel, FORTUNE’S SON, and was continuing to write my little heart out, my publisher had taken a “wait and see” stance on my proposed third, fourth and fifth novels, leaving me sitting impotently on my thumbs. To make matters worse, my agent quit the publishing business altogether, leaving me high and dry.
It was during this frustrating dry spell that the wonderful Diane Gaston suggested I try writing something short to help bridge the gap until I could sell another of my full length novels. While I had read a number of the Historical Undone titles, it had never occurred to me to write anything short. To be honest, I didn’t know if I even could. Novella length romantic fiction presents some serious challenges—to fully develop characters and a plot readers will embrace in 50-100 pages is no easy feat. Yet, it seemed a logical and productive use of my time, so I decided to give it a go.
Loosely inspired by The Belle’s Stratagem, a Georgian era play I had read, the result of my efforts was a 15K word story about a broken engagement. Believing it “perfect” for Harlequin’s Historical Undone line, I joyfully sent it off. Unfortunately, Harlequin didn’t share my sentiments! But by then, I had already submitted to several other publishers, certain that one of them would snatch up my short masterpiece. Wrong again. I got several more rejections.
Having by then decided to write it all off as a “failed experiment,” you can imagine my shock in receiving a conditional acceptance from an erotic romance publisher who loved the story but felt it needed more development and a higher heat level. Develop the romance and make it longer? (Big smile.) No problem! Amp up the heat level to erotic level? (Gulp.) I was terrified.
You see, I had never written steamy love scenes. While having strong sexual tension, my other books are pretty much PG-13. Yet, armed with a burning desire to see something, anything, published to keep my career moving forward, I accepted the contract with the promise to deliver a scorching hot historical romance that readers would love. Easy, right? NOT!!!
After working tirelessly for weeks, I submitted my revised manuscript only to receive 8 pages of notes back from my editor! I was crushed. Where did I go wrong? What was lacking? While I had adopted the more graphic language used in erotic romance and had the “mechanics” in abundance, my editor described the weakness in the manuscript as lacking the “sixth sense,” or the emotional connection the reader must feel. In any great love scene, the reader must be engaged with the characters’ emotion not just visualizing the act. Engaging the reader in this manner is one of the most difficult undertakings of any writer, but to integrate this into sex scenes is exponentially harder. It is a true gift when done well.
Wanting very much to learn how, I set out to find authors who meld strong emotion into explicit love scenes, authors I wished to emulate. While the idea was truly daunting, I also perceived a golden opportunity to stretch myself as a writer. It was time for a crash course in Sex Writing 101.
I began by reading- devouring actually- works by bestselling erotic romance authors to learn what they do and how they do it. I discovered authors like Robin Schone, Sylvia Day, and Charlotte Featherstone, who combine beautifully crafted prose in stories with deep sensuality, and Lila DiPasqua who I much admire for her creative vision in melding real history with eroticism.
Armed with what I had learned from these amazing authors, I went back to work on A BREACH OF PROMISE with the goal of writing an erotic level romance my own way— with a well-drawn and emotionally compelling plot, sympathetic characters, witty dialogue, a touch of humor, and scorching heat without the “kink factor.”
Released a month ago, my “naughty little novella” has had an incredible early reception and has already scored me a three book deal with another erotic romance publisher. Me, a purveyor of high quality smut? Who knew? ;P
ABOUT VICTORIA VANE:
A lover of history and deeply romantic stories, Victoria combines these elements to craft romantic historical novels and novellas for a mature reading audience. She also writes non-erotic historical fiction as Emery Lee. Erotic Historical Romance Titles:
A BREACH OF PROMISE, Ellora’s Cave
A WILD NIGHT’S BRIDE, a sexy rollicking Georgian romp – Coming soon from Breathless press.
A BREACH OF PROMISE by Victoria Vane
WHEN CHARM AND PERSUASION FAIL… ONLY SEDUCTION REMAINS….
On the night of her betrothal, Lydia Trent receives just a taste of what ecstasy will be at the hands of her fiancé…and then he leaves her wanting. After waiting six years, and tired of being neglected by her exceedingly reluctant husband-to-be, Lydia decides to break it off. When Marcus, Lord Russell, receives Lydia’s letter requesting a release from their contract, he is stunned by her audacity. Confident he’ll have her eating out of his hand with his usual wit and charm, he’s determined to repair the damage. However, the headstrong woman she’s blossomed into is equally determined to thwart his every effort to win her back. Marcus discovers, in spite of her conviction to end the union, Lydia is more responsive to his touch than he ever imagined. He just needs to get her alone to unleash the promised passion he sees within his wanton virgin. Marcus will use any tool in his arsenal to exploit her weakness—his kisses, his hands, his mouth…her own body. In short, he’ll just have to ruin her!
“Reckless hearts, battling wits, and plenty of steam in a wonderfully well drawn Georgian setting.” -NYT Bestselling author Grace Burrowes
LINKS TO EXCERPTS:
http://www.jasminejade.com/productspecs/9781419937330.htm
Thanks Emery/Victoria for being my guest! Everyone, tell our guest what level of sensuality you like best in your Historical Romances! Or any comment for a chance to win a download of A BREACH OF PROMISE.
I’m so impressed by your determination. Congratulations on your move to the dark side (!). Levels of eroticism don’t bother/attract me as much as the strength of the characters and the ability to believe in them as real people – which is something you’ve already said yourself on the blog.
pageturner345@gmail.com
Hi Victoria! Thanks for telling us about your interesting journey into an erotic author. A Breach of Promise sounds like a fun and must read.
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@pageturner345- I believe in writing great stories foremost, with the erotic elements enhancing the romance. I will never write only sufficient plot to string sex scenes together. I wouldn’t enjoy reading that so why should I write it?
@ CathyP- ABOP is a truly fun story. I hope you will check out the excerpt links.
I love to read historical romance and am thankful that writers like you have the tenacity to persevere through rejection letters, deadlines, and edits. So thank you, I am all admiration and look forward to reading your novella.
I don’t buy books based on the levels of eroticism/sensuality. For me it’s all about the story, if it’s a romance, it’s got to have a HEA and be believable.
Well done for persevering and not giving up.
yvonnedvn[at]yahoo[dot]ie
@ Kat- This is a tough career but I know I’m doing what I was meant to do and if that requires a bit of reinvention- so be it!LOL!
@ Beebs- I am also all about the story but if a heightened sensuality level will help it to sell- well, the girl’s gotta eat after all!
Welcome, Victoria! And all the commenters. I’m glad you all put story first!
(back to my story now)
I’m impressed, Victoria. You’re one determined lady. I’m glad it paid off. I look forward to reading your books.
LOL! Good point, Victoria.
Victoria thank you for continuing on giving us A BREACH OF PROMISE. Historical romance is my favorite genre and erotic to it and it gets even better!
Your book sounds great!
Kudos for doing what you had to do to stay in the game! And historical erotica is the only erotica I read. There is just something about an erotic romance set in nineteenth century England that makes it that much more romantic and that much hotter! Congrats on this latest!
I’m glad your determination payed off in the end by allowing you to expand into a new area and moving you forward in your endeavors.
@ Artemis- I love historical too. I always have.
@Jcp- Thanks! It was so much fun to write and I’m truly excited about my April release, A WILD NIGHTS BRIDE. It’s very sexy and funny too!
@Louisa- I believe very much in developing the romance along with the heat and but for the reader to feel rewarded at the end. LOL!
@pixzlee- Sometimes we all need to break out of our comfort zone. Life is just a grand adventure after all!
hi victoria – i look forward to reading this, i agree it is quite difficult to create the right concoction of romance and chemistry in erotica… I like Cheryl Holt’s works as well and will check out your suggestions – have you read Fanny Hill? sort of a precursor to today’s erotica .. its interesting
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